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Theme      Are you sweet-touched or are you into spicy food?  My essay      I like both sweet and spicy food. I enjoy Korean dishes tasted chili pepper, and I like also sweet chocolates. ChatGPT      Your essay is clear and effectively communicates your enjoyment of both sweet and spicy foods. However, here's a minor adjustment for clarity and grammar:      "I enjoy both sweet and spicy foods. I like Korean dishes that are seasoned with chili pepper, and I also enjoy sweet chocolates." Explanation:      "I enjoy both sweet and spicy foods" is a clearer way to express your preference for both types of cuisine.      "I like Korean dishes that are seasoned with chili pepper" specifies that it's the Korean dishes, not you, that are seasoned with chili pepper.      "And" is replaced with "I also enjoy" to maintain parallel structure and clarity in your sentence.      Y...

Theme      Is there anything that you should have done today?  My essay      No, there aren't. I have done all I should do today. But I have a lot of to do tomorrow and on coming Sunday, and Monday. ChatGPT Your essay is clear and conveys that you've completed your tasks for the day. However, there are some minor adjustments for clarity and grammar: "No, there aren't. I have done everything I needed to do today. However, I have a lot to do tomorrow, as well as on Sunday and Monday." Explanation: "No, there aren't" is correct, but for clarity, it's better to specify what you're referring to: tasks you should have done. "I have done everything I needed to do today" is clearer and more direct. "However" is used to contrast your completed tasks with the upcoming ones. "I have a lot to do tomorrow, as well as on Sunday and Monday" provides a clearer explanation of your upcoming tasks. Your essay effectively communicat...

Theme      When you were a child, what did you want to be when you grew up? My essay      I was a child, I wanted to be a chef.  I used to like to see some recipe of cuisine, because recipe showed me a dream of cooking. ChatGPT Your essay is concise and captures your childhood aspiration clearly. However, there are a couple of adjustments for clarity and grammar: "When I was a child, I wanted to be a chef. I used to enjoy looking at recipes because they showed me the dream of cooking." Explanation: "I was a child" clarifies the timeframe of your childhood aspiration. "I wanted to be a chef" provides a clearer statement of your career goal. "I used to enjoy looking at recipes" maintains consistency in the past tense and expresses your enjoyment of cooking. Your essay effectively communicates your childhood ambition to become a chef. Well done!

Theme      Are there any challenges you would like to have a go at one day?  My essay      One day I would like to start my own bookstore or library. I want to start my business related to books and make a space for people to read books in a calm atmosphere. ChatGPT Your essay is clear and well-written, but there's a minor adjustment to improve clarity: "One day, I would like to start my own bookstore or library. I want to establish a business related to books and create a space where people can read in a calm atmosphere." Explanation: Adding a comma after "One day" helps to separate the introductory phrase from the main clause. Replacing "make" with "establish" provides a clearer description of starting a business. Your essay effectively communicates your desire to pursue entrepreneurship in the book industry. Well done!

Theme      Which do you prefer, rainy days or sunny days?  My essay      I like better sunny days than rainy days because I can go out. And I am tend to get some headache at rainy day. ChatGPT Your essay is clear, but there are a couple of grammar and word choice adjustments to enhance clarity: "I like sunny days better than rainy days because I can go out. And I tend to get a headache on rainy days." Explanation: "Like better" can be simplified to "like...than" for smoother sentence structure. "I am tend to get some headache" should be "I tend to get a headache" to correct the grammatical structure. Overall, your message is effectively conveyed. Great job!

Theme      Are you a perfectionist or fairy easygoing?  My essay      I'm generally easygoing but a perfectionist, especially in Japanese expressions. If I got another job, I would like to choose a proofreader.  ChatGPT Your essay is clear and communicates your stance well. Here's a minor adjustment: "fairy" should be "fairly" to convey the intended meaning of "moderately" or "reasonably." Suggested revision: "I'm generally easygoing but fairly perfectionist, especially in Japanese expressions. If I got another job, I would like to choose a proofreader." Explanation: The corrected version ensures clarity and accuracy in conveying that you are somewhat of a perfectionist. "Fairy" typically refers to a mythical creature and doesn't fit the context here. "Fairly" is the appropriate adverb to modify "perfectionist" and convey your intended meaning. Overall, your essay effectively communicates yo...

Theme Have you had any memorable encounters lately?  My essay      Yes, I got transferred to a different located school, so I had many memorable encounters students or colleagues.  ChatGPT      Your essay is clear and to the point. Here's a minor adjustment:      "located school" could be revised to "location of the school" for clarity and smoother flow.      Suggested revision: "Yes, I got transferred to a school in a different location, so I had many memorable encounters with students and colleagues."      Explanation: The revised version clarifies that the encounters occurred in a different geographical area, which adds context to your statement. Additionally, using "with" instead of "or" maintains parallel structure and improves readability. Overall, your essay effectively communicates that your recent transfer has led to memorable interactions with students and colleagues. Well done!

Theme      Do you have someone you could call your best friend? My essay      Yes, my best friend from high school is still my best friend today. Last weekend, he came to my town and we had dinner at the IZAKAYA.  ChatGPT      Your essay is clear and well-written. Here are a couple of minor adjustments:      "came to my town" can be revised to "visited my town" for clarity.      "had dinner at the IZAKAYA" can be rewritten as "we went out for dinner at an izakaya" to avoid capitalization and provide more detail.      Suggested revision: "Yes, my best friend from high school is still my best friend today. Last weekend, he visited my town, and we went out for dinner at an izakaya."      Explanation: Using "visited" instead of "came to" clarifies that your friend came to your town for a visit. Additionally, "we went out for dinner at an izakaya" provides a more detailed description...

Theme      Do you have an item that you carry with you at all time? My essay      The one item that I always carry with me is the diary for my work. I use also ICT tools such as MacBook or Tablet, I think it is important to write down things off-line. ChatGPT      Your essay is well-written, but here are a couple of minor adjustments:      "The one item that I always carry with me" can be simplified to "One item I always carry" for smoother flow.      "I use also ICT tools" should be "I also use ICT tools".      Suggested revision: "One item I always carry is my work diary. While I also use ICT tools like my MacBook or tablet, I find it important to write things down offline."      Explanation: Simplifying the phrase "The one item that I always carry with me" to "One item I always carry" makes the sentence more concise. Additionally, placing "also" before the verb "use" in the second...

 Theme     Do you think you are tall or short? My essay     Yes, I think I am pretty tall. And my sister and brother are also tall.

 歴史学において、歴史家による主観の問題というか、歴史家による事実の選択と解釈という営みから逃れられないのは、常識の範疇に属する知識だと思う。 一方、現代の言説空間では、「客観」がもてはやされていて、主観は詰られる傾向がある。出棺から逃れられないなか、どのように事実に立脚した科学的で妥当な議論を構築できるか、そうした歴史学の営みをも体験できる授業を紡いでいきたい。

授業がはじまった。初対面の生徒たちとの授業。 内容論とか目標論、方法論ももちろん大事なのだけれど、まずは、生徒教師の関係の構築かな。そっれは上下関係を前提とするものではなくて、ともに市民として生き、社会をつくるためにともに考え、行動できる関係として。お互いの存在を尊重しあえる関係として。

Theme      Describe what you are wearing right now?  My essay      I'm wearing a business suite. I'm tying my favorite red neck tie. ChatGPT      Your essay is mostly correct, but there's a small error:      "business suite" should be "business suit".      Suggested revision: "I'm wearing a business suit. I'm tying my favorite red necktie."      Explanation: "Suite" typically refers to a set of rooms, while "suit" refers to a set of matching garments. Also, "necktie" is usually written as one word.      Overall, your description effectively communicates what you are wearing. Well done!

 User Theme      Do you get hot easily or feel the cold easily?  My essay      I think I feel the cold easily than I feel the heat. It may be the reason why I live in a region with a cool climate. ChatGPT      Your essay is clear, but there's a minor grammatical issue:      "I think I feel the cold easily than I feel the heat."      Suggested revision: "I think I feel the cold more easily than I feel the heat."      Explanation: Adding "more" clarifies the comparison between feeling cold and feeling heat.      Your response effectively communicates your sensitivity to cold weather. Well done!

Theme      What is your favorite book?  My essay      My favorite books are works by Masahiko KISHI, an excellent talented sociologist. He is also known as an outstanding ethnographer. ChatGPT      Your essay is clear, but there's a minor grammatical issue:      "He is also known as an outstanding ethnographer."      Suggested revision: "He is also known for being an outstanding ethnographer."      Explanation: This revision provides a smoother transition between the previous sentence and the description of Masahiko Kishi's expertise.      Your essay effectively communicates your favorite author and provides relevant information about Masahiko Kishi. Well done!

Theme      What do you find difficult to understand?  My essay      I find it difficult to understand what makes some people kill other people. Politically, with extreme faiths or after some troubles people might be able to kill others. ChatGPT      Your essay effectively communicates your difficulty in understanding a complex issue. However, there's a minor grammatical issue:      "Politically, with extreme faiths or after some troubles people might be able to kill others."      Suggested revision: "Politically, due to extreme beliefs or after experiencing certain troubles, people might resort to killing others."      Explanation: This revision clarifies the sentence structure and improves readability.      Your essay conveys your thoughts clearly. Well done!

 自由意志の問題について関心がある。自由意志をないものとして考えたところで問題はないし、それどころかもっと自由で生きやすく生きられるのでは、とも思うのだ。

 私個人としてはかなり厭世的な部分があり、「こんな社会では生きている価値がない」という思いが去来することがままあります。けれども、それが私の仕事の原点というか、だからこそ、生きるに値する社会をともに作っていきたいと思うのです。

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 新しいまちに住み始めた。 歩くとたのしい。こういう時間は貴重だ。

 年度が変わった。 とても忙しくなりそう。でもがんばるのだ。 今年の目標のひとつが、丁寧に生きていくこと。