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年度が変わる。学校に新しい春が来る。 わたし個人のことでいうと、春から職場が変わり、違うまちに住み始める。今日はその地で「川沿いに歩く」というのをしてみた。日々の雑事に追われているとこうもいかないのだけれど、こういう時間を大切にしたい。 そして、明日からの新年度勤務に向けて、まず買ったもの。ハチワレ(ちいかわ より)。ちいかわのキャラクターにハマってきている。ちいかわによって何かが救われる気がするのだ。

 かつて『本で床は抜けるのか』という本を読んで、「わたしレベルではまだまだだな」と思っていた次第。それから数年がたち、どんどん増え続けた。 引っ越しがたいへんだ、という話です。

Theme      Is this a leap year? If so, in which city are the Olympic Games being held?  My essay      Yes, 2024 is a leap year. The Olympic Games will be held in Paris from July 26th to August 11th. 

 蟹をもらった。漁業に従事する卒業生から。 勤めた学校が地域の魅力にあふれた学校で、昨日は家の畑で採れたきゅうりを持ってきてくれた卒業生がいた。そして今日は蟹。 新たな春の足音が聞こえる。

Theme      Do you like coffee or tea? My essay      I prefer coffee when I wake up in the morning. I am so dependent on coffee that I get the headache without it. ChatGPT      Your essay is clear, but there's a minor adjustment for clarity and style. Here's the revised version:      "I prefer coffee in the morning when I wake up. I'm quite dependent on it, to the point where I get a headache without it." Changes made: Added "in the morning" for clarity. Clarified "dependent on coffee" to "dependent on it" for smoother phrasing.      These adjustments address the grammar mistakes and word misuses in your essay. If you have any more questions or need further assistance, feel free to ask!

Theme      What is your favorite country?  My essay      I have no special favorite country, but in the university, I wrote the graduation thesis about French history. My thesis is about French colonial policy and the independence movement in colonized Algeria. ChatGPT      Your essay is clear, but there's a minor adjustment for clarity and style. Here's the revised version:      "I don't have a specific favorite country, but during university, I wrote my graduation thesis on French history. It focused on French colonial policy and the independence movement in colonized Algeria."      Changes made: Changed "no special favorite" to "don't have a specific favorite" for smoother phrasing. Clarified "thesis" as "graduation thesis" for specificity.      These adjustments address the grammar mistakes and word misuses in your essay. If you have any more questions or need further assistance, feel free...

Theme      What condiments do you use with fried eggs?  My essay      I haven't eaten them in a long time, but when I cook fried egg, I top it with salt and pepper. Sometimes  I try  ketchup of Heinz, which is also great. ChatGPT      Your essay is clear, but there's a minor adjustment for clarity and style. Here's the revised version:      "I haven't eaten them in a long time, but when I cook fried eggs, I top them with salt and pepper. Sometimes, I also try Heinz ketchup, which is also great." Changes made: Added "them" after "I top" to clarify the object. Added a comma after "Sometimes" for smoother phrasing.      These adjustments address the grammar mistakes and word misuses in your essay. If you have any more questions or need further assistance, feel free to ask!

Theme      What is your favorite soft drink?  My essay      My favorite soft drink is cola. Today I drank the Coca-Cola limited edition flavour featuring the K-Wave.  ChatGPT      Your essay is clear and concise. However, there's a minor adjustment for clarity and style. Here's the revised version:      "My favorite soft drink is cola. Today, I tried the limited edition Coca-Cola flavor featuring the K-Wave." Changes made: Added a comma after "Today" for better flow. Clarified "tried" instead of "drank" to convey trying a new flavor.      These adjustments address the grammar mistakes and word misuses in your essay. If you have any more questions or need further assistance, feel free to ask!

Theme      Is there anything that you simply cannot let slide?  My essay      I get annoyed when I encounter something to treat humans as things. 'Human resource', in Japanese '人材',  this word is widely used among business people, but '材' implies things not humans. ChatGPT      Your essay is clear, but there's a minor adjustment for clarity and style. Here's the revised version:      "I get annoyed when I encounter something that treats humans as objects. The term 'human resource', or '人材' in Japanese, is widely used among business people, but '材' implies objects rather than individuals." Changes made: Added "that" before "treats" for smoother phrasing. Provided clarification about the term "human resource" for better understanding.      These adjustments address the grammar mistakes and word misuses in your essay. If you have any more questions or need further assistance, feel free to ask!

Theme      Do you have a place where you can feel calm?   My essay      At the library. It has a lot of books and resources, and calm atmosphere. I also go to the cafe to stay calm. ChatGPT      Your essay is clear, but there's a minor adjustment for clarity and style. Here's the revised version:      "At the library. It has a lot of books and resources, and a calm atmosphere. I also go to a cafe to stay calm." Changes made: Added "a" before "calm atmosphere" for proper article usage. Removed "it" before "also" for smoother phrasing.      These adjustments address the grammar mistakes and word misuses in your essay. If you have any more questions or need further assistance, feel free to ask!

Theme      What do you do when you want to focus? My essay      When I want to focus, I need to drink coffee and to listen to jazz music. I also tend to take a walk to change of my pace. ChatGPT      Your essay is clear, but there's a minor adjustment for clarity and style. Here's the revised version:      "When I want to focus, I need to drink coffee and listen to jazz music. I also tend to take a walk to change my pace."      Changes made: Removed "to" before "listen" for smoother phrasing. Changed "change of" to "change" for simpler expression.      These adjustments address the grammar mistakes and word misuses in your essay. If you have any more questions or need further assistance, feel free to ask!

Theme      Are you a soccer person or a baseball person?  My essay      I'm a definitely baseball person. I used to support Chunichi Dragons directed by Hiromitsu OCHIAI. I hope to watch the game at the stadium in the series of 2024! ChatGPT      Your essay is clear, but there's a minor adjustment for clarity and style. Here's the revised version:      "I'm definitely a baseball person. I used to support the Chunichi Dragons when they were directed by Hiromitsu OCHIAI. I hope to watch their games at the stadium during the 2024 series!" Changes made: Added "the" before "Chunichi Dragons" for proper noun usage. Changed "in the series of 2024" to "during the 2024 series" for smoother phrasing.      These adjustments address the grammar mistakes and word misuses in your essay. If you have any more questions or need further assistance, feel free to ask!

Theme      What do you think you will be doing around this time next year?  My essay      Around this time next year, I aspire to be accepted into graduate school. To pass the exam and get the degree of master, I should more and more study and write papers.       ChatGPT Your essay is clear, but there's a minor adjustment for clarity and style. Here's the revised version:      "Around this time next year, I aspire to be accepted into graduate school. To pass the exam and obtain a master's degree, I should study and write papers more diligently." Changes made: Changed "get the degree of master" to "obtain a master's degree" for better phrasing. Adjusted "more and more study" to "study more diligently" for improved expression.      These adjustments address the grammar mistakes and word misuses in your essay. If you have any more questions or need further assistance, feel free to ask!

Theme      Do you fall asleep easily or do you have trouble getting to sleep?  My essay      I can go to sleep very quickly but I have always trouble with waking up at the morning.  Although I know that it's important go to bed early, I tend to be night owl on reading books. ChatGPT      Your essay is clear, but there's a minor adjustment for clarity and style. Here's the revised version:      "I can fall asleep very quickly, but I always have trouble waking up in the morning. Although I know it's important to go to bed early, I tend to be a night owl when reading books."      Changes made: Added a comma after "quickly" for smoother flow. Removed "with" after "always" for better phrasing. Clarified "night owl on" to "night owl when" for proper expression.      These adjustments address the grammar mistakes and word misuses in your essay. If you have any more questions or need further assi...

Theme      Are you suffering from any illnesses?  My essay      It may be too much to say that I am suffering from 'illness', but I have a heavy headache when lack coffee. I am some kind of an addict of coffee.  ChatGPT      Your essay is clear, but there's a minor adjustment for clarity and style. Here's the revised version:      "It may be too much to say that I am suffering from an 'illness,' but I get a heavy headache when I lack coffee. I am somewhat of an addict when it comes to coffee."      Changes made: Replaced "have" with "get" for better grammar. Corrected "an addict of" to "addicted to" for more accurate phrasing.      These changes aim to enhance the overall coherence and fluency of your essay. If you have any more questions or need further assistance, feel free to ask!

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教育科学研究会『教育』４月号が出ました。特集は「ちょっとやってみようかな」「これからの算数・数学教育を切り拓こう」で、新しい春での挑戦を応援する誌面です。 春に向け、ぜひご覧ください。 ※ 本誌には私は編集委員の一員として関わっています ちょっとやってみようかな：学校と教室にやわらかな風を 子どもも大人も力をぬいて /  鈴木啓史 いっしょに おおきくなろう! /  千葉春佳 ペンちゃんと先生も仲間だよ! /  島崎悠一 ゆうなちゃんと私の成長日記： 子どものペースにまかせて   /  麦都穂 私が思う教職の＜希望＞： “生徒の声を力に”英語教師を生きる / 堀埜 真矢 体育の学びでつながる子ども /  久保州 中学生と生きる一鎧を脱いで /  中林沙也加 [手紙] 若い教師のみなさんへ / 中村(新井) 清二 これからの算数・数学教育を 切り拓こう 算数に夢中になる時間を /  松島あゆみ 量に基づく算数・数学教育を /  山本忠義 手を動かし対話する数学の楽しさ /  中山淳 子どもの納得を生む授業を /  未定整基 数学散歩のススメ： 数学教育の楽しみ方  /  荒井嘉夫

Theme      Do you have a favorite sports team?  My essay      I used to have a favorite sports team, Chunichi Dragons during 2004 to 2011. In this period, Hiromitsu OCHIAI directed this team, letting the team live the golden age. But Dragons has fallen down now. ChatGPT      Your essay is clear, but there's a minor adjustment for clarity and style. Here's the revised version:      "I used to have a favorite sports team, the Chunichi Dragons, from 2004 to 2011. During this period, Hiromitsu OCHIAI directed the team, leading them to their golden age. However, the Dragons have since declined."      Changes made: Added "the" before "Chunichi Dragons" for proper noun usage. Clarified the timeframe by specifying "from 2004 to 2011." Adjusted the phrasing for better flow and readability.      These changes aim to enhance the overall coherence and fluency of your essay. If you have any more questions ...

Theme      Has anything made your heart skip a beat recently? My essay      It has been successive releases of newly uncovered record from my favorite K-POP groups that made my heart skip a beat. NiziU has released digital single 2 months in a row, and the new album "easy" has been published from LE SERRAFIM. Twice also released new album "With YOU-th". ChatGPT      Your essay is clear, but there's a minor adjustment for clarity and style. Here's the revised version:      "It has been the successive releases of newly uncovered records from my favorite K-POP groups that made my heart skip a beat. NiziU has released a digital single for two consecutive months, and LE SERRAFIM published a new album titled 'easy.' Twice also released a new album called 'With YOU-th.'"      Changes made: Added "the" before "successive" for better phrasing. Clarified the title of LE SERRAFIM's new album to "easy." Changed...

Theme      What cheers you up no matter what?  My essay      RIMA, a member of NiziU, makes me happy, no matter how depressed I am. She executes the greatest rap performance, empowering me. Her positive personality also cheers me. ChatGPT      Your essay is clear, but there's a minor adjustment for clarity and style. Here's the revised version: "RIMA, a member of NiziU, never fails to cheer me up, no matter how down I feel. Her exceptional rap performance empowers me, and her positive personality is a constant source of joy."      Here are the explanations for the changes: Improved the phrasing for better flow and readability. Adjusted punctuation for proper grammar.      These changes aim to enhance the overall coherence and fluency of your essay. Feel free to ask if you have any questions or if you'd like further assistance!

Theme      Are there any phrases or expressions that you tend to use frequently?  My essay      The word I unintentionally use a lot is 'appropriate'.  At work, when asked my opinion, I often say ' the decision is appropriate' or 'the shown agenda is not appropriate'.  ChatGPT      Your essay is clear, but there's a minor adjustment for clarity and style. Here's the revised version:      "The word I unintentionally use a lot is 'appropriate.' At work, when asked for my opinion, I often say 'the decision is appropriate' or 'the agenda presented is not appropriate.'"      Here are the explanations for the changes: Improved the phrasing for better flow and readability. Added "for" after "asked" for proper grammar.      These changes aim to enhance the overall coherence and fluency of your essay. Feel free to ask if you have any questions or if you'd like further assistance!

Theme      Is there anything that you think you couldn't live without? My essay      It may be philosophical to say this, but I don't think I could live without Language. Through language, we think, work and communicate with each other. We also experience attractive adventures by reading novels. ChatGPT      Your essay is clear, but there's a minor adjustment for clarity and style. Here's the revised version:      "It may sound philosophical, but I don't think I could live without language. Through language, we think, work, and communicate with each other. We also embark on fascinating adventures through reading novels."      Here are the explanations for the changes: Improved the phrasing for better flow and readability. Added commas for proper punctuation.      These changes aim to enhance the overall coherence and fluency of your essay. Feel free to ask if you have any questions or if you'd like...

Theme      If you were to describe yourself in colors, which color would you be today? My essay      Today color is sky blue and rainbow. I have nothing special today and some time to be calm like sky blue. And I read a book about the rainbow pride parade. ChatGPT      Your essay is clear, but there's a minor adjustment for clarity and style. Here's the revised version:      "Today, my color is sky blue and rainbow. I have nothing special going on, giving me some time to be calm like the sky. I also read a book about the rainbow pride parade."      Here are the explanations for the changes: Added a comma after "Today" for proper punctuation. Improved the phrasing for better flow and readability.      These changes aim to enhance the overall coherence and fluency of your essay. Feel free to ask if you have any questions or if you'd like further assistance!

Theme      Did anything tick you off today?  My essay      No, nothing ticked me off today. everything is all right, it's overall calm day. ChatGPT      Your essay is clear, but there's a minor adjustment for clarity and style. Here's the revised version:      "No, nothing ticked me off today. Everything is alright; it's been an overall calm day."      Here are the explanations for the changes: Adjusted punctuation for better flow and readability. Improved the phrasing for better flow.      These changes aim to enhance the overall coherence and fluency of your essay. Feel free to ask if you have any questions or if you'd like further assistance!

Theme      What has been your greatest failure in life?  My essay      My greatest failure in life is not going to graduate school after university. But after my graduation,  I've entered the correspondence course of master's degree, while I work at high school. ChatGPT      Your essay is clear, but there's a minor adjustment for clarity and style. Here's the revised version:      "My greatest failure in life is not attending graduate school after university. However, after my graduation, I enrolled in a correspondence course for a master's degree while working at a high school."      Here are the explanations for the changes: Changed "not going to" to "not attending" for a more formal expression. Added "However" for a smoother transition. Improved the phrasing for better flow and readability.      These changes aim to enhance the overall coherence and fluency of your essay. Feel free to ...

Theme      When was the last time you had a cold?  My essay      In late January, I woke up with a fever. That might be why I 've been to a mega city and communicated with a lot of people, diagnosed covid-19 in a hospital that time. ChatGPT      Your essay is clear, but there's a minor adjustment for clarity and style. Here's the revised version:      "In late January, I woke up with a fever. It might be because I had visited a mega city and interacted with many people. I got tested for COVID-19 in a hospital at that time."      Here are the explanations for the changes: Clarified the cause of the fever for better flow. Adjusted the phrasing for better flow and readability.      These changes aim to enhance the overall coherence and fluency of your essay. Feel free to ask if you have any questions or if you'd like further assistance!

Theme      What do you do to stay healthy?  My essay      I walk to work everyday.  I take a walk for 20 minutes a day.  And mentally, I situate some house plants near my desk. ChatGPT      Your essay is clear, but there's a minor adjustment for clarity and style. Here's the revised version:      "I walk to work every day, and I also take a 20-minute walk daily. Mentally, I keep some house plants near my desk."      Here are the explanations for the changes: Merged the two sentences about walking for better flow. Adjusted the phrasing for better flow and readability.      These changes aim to enhance the overall coherence and fluency of your essay. Feel free to ask if you have any questions or if you'd like further assistance!

Theme      Do you believe in ghosts?  My essay      I think there are ghosts although I have never seen ghosts in fact. It is no doubt that our world has something invisible from the scientific view.  ChatGPT      Your essay is clear, but there's a minor adjustment for clarity and style. Here's the revised version:      "I believe there might be ghosts, although I have never seen one. It is undeniable that our world contains elements that are invisible from a scientific perspective."      Here are the explanations for the changes: Changed "think there are ghosts" to "believe there might be ghosts" for a more nuanced expression. Adjusted the phrasing for better flow and readability.      These changes aim to enhance the overall coherence and fluency of your essay. Feel free to ask if you have any questions or if you'd like further assistance!

Theme      What is your life dream?  My essay      I have some dreams. First, I want to get a master's degree in education within a few years. Second, after my retirement, I want to establish my own private library for citizens. ChatGPT      Your essay is clear, but there's a minor adjustment for clarity and style. Here's the revised version:      "I have some dreams. First, I want to earn a master's degree in education within a few years. Second, after my retirement, I aim to establish my own private library for citizens."      Here are the explanations for the changes: Changed "get a master's degree" to "earn a master's degree" for a more formal expression. Adjusted the phrasing for better flow and readability.      These changes aim to enhance the overall coherence and fluency of your essay. Feel free to ask if you have any questions or if you'd like further assistance!

Theme      How do you take your coffee? Black? White? With sugar?  My essay      I usually take my coffee black.  I am a dedicated coffee drinker that I drink coffee about 1 litre a day. ChatGPT      Your essay is clear, but there's a minor adjustment for clarity and style. Here's the revised version:      "I usually take my coffee black. I am such a dedicated coffee drinker that I consume about 1 liter of coffee a day."      Here are the explanations for the changes: Clarified the quantity consumed by changing "drink coffee about" to "consume about." Adjusted the phrasing for better flow and readability.      These changes aim to enhance the overall coherence and fluency of your essay. Feel free to ask if you have any questions or if you'd like further assistance!

今日は卒業式。 はじめて担任を持ったクラスが、巣立っていった。特別な思い、特別な記憶があるクラスでもあったので、思い出もさまざまだが、いつかまとめれたらいいな。