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年度が変わる。学校に新しい春が来る。 わたし個人のことでいうと、春から職場が変わり、違うまちに住み始める。今日はその地で「川沿いに歩く」というのをしてみた。日々の雑事に追われているとこうもいかないのだけれど、こういう時間を大切にしたい。 そして、明日からの新年度勤務に向けて、まず買ったもの。ハチワレ(ちいかわ より)。ちいかわのキャラクターにハマってきている。ちいかわによって何かが救われる気がするのだ。

 かつて『本で床は抜けるのか』という本を読んで、「わたしレベルではまだまだだな」と思っていた次第。それから数年がたち、どんどん増え続けた。 引っ越しがたいへんだ、という話です。

Theme      Is this a leap year? If so, in which city are the Olympic Games being held?  My essay      Yes, 2024 is a leap year. The Olympic Games will be held in Paris from July 26th to August 11th. 

 蟹をもらった。漁業に従事する卒業生から。 勤めた学校が地域の魅力にあふれた学校で、昨日は家の畑で採れたきゅうりを持ってきてくれた卒業生がいた。そして今日は蟹。 新たな春の足音が聞こえる。

Theme      Do you like coffee or tea? My essay      I prefer coffee when I wake up in the morning. I am so dependent on coffee that I get the headache without it. ChatGPT      Your essay is clear, but there's a minor adjustment for clarity and style. Here's the revised version:      "I prefer coffee in the morning when I wake up. I'm quite dependent on it, to the point where I get a headache without it." Changes made: Added "in the morning" for clarity. Clarified "dependent on coffee" to "dependent on it" for smoother phrasing.      These adjustments address the grammar mistakes and word misuses in your essay. If you have any more questions or need further assistance, feel free to ask!

Theme      What is your favorite country?  My essay      I have no special favorite country, but in the university, I wrote the graduation thesis about French history. My thesis is about French colonial policy and the independence movement in colonized Algeria. ChatGPT      Your essay is clear, but there's a minor adjustment for clarity and style. Here's the revised version:      "I don't have a specific favorite country, but during university, I wrote my graduation thesis on French history. It focused on French colonial policy and the independence movement in colonized Algeria."      Changes made: Changed "no special favorite" to "don't have a specific favorite" for smoother phrasing. Clarified "thesis" as "graduation thesis" for specificity.      These adjustments address the grammar mistakes and word misuses in your essay. If you have any more questions or need further assistance, feel free...

Theme      What condiments do you use with fried eggs?  My essay      I haven't eaten them in a long time, but when I cook fried egg, I top it with salt and pepper. Sometimes  I try  ketchup of Heinz, which is also great. ChatGPT      Your essay is clear, but there's a minor adjustment for clarity and style. Here's the revised version:      "I haven't eaten them in a long time, but when I cook fried eggs, I top them with salt and pepper. Sometimes, I also try Heinz ketchup, which is also great." Changes made: Added "them" after "I top" to clarify the object. Added a comma after "Sometimes" for smoother phrasing.      These adjustments address the grammar mistakes and word misuses in your essay. If you have any more questions or need further assistance, feel free to ask!